Corrections+Samir+and+Camille

Translation of this article: http://www.zoom-cinema.fr/film/super-size-me/592/secret-de-tournage

Why __chips__ (1) are __crusty__ (2) ...

[...] Customers, competitors and even __critical gastronomic__ (3) __appreciate for a long time__ (4) the taste of McDonald's __chips__ (5). Their __particular__ (6) taste __does not come either__ (7) from the variety of potatoes bought by __MCDONALD__ (8), nor __by__ (9) the technology used for their transformation, nor __by the culinary equipment which cooked__ (10). Other chains buy their __chips__ __at__ (11) the same suppliers, use Russet Burbank and have similar deep fryers in their kitchens. The taste __of a chips__ (12) depends essentially on __some oil of cooking__ (13). __During about several ten years__ (14), __MsDonald's__ (15) cooked its __chips__ in a mixture __of 7 % of oil of cotton and 93 % of fat of beef__ (16). __Chips__ __won it__ (17) a unique aroma - __and more fat of beef saturated by book than a hamburger__ (18). (117 words)

Confronted with __a concert__ (19) of critics concerning the quantity of cholesterol __of__ (20) its __chips__, __McDonald's company__ (21) __has crossed in the__ (22) pure vegetable oil in 1990. This change represented a considerable challenge: how to make __chips__ __for the__ (23) subtle taste of beef without cooking them in the tallow? A simple look __in ingredients used at present__ (24) for the preparation of McDonald's __chips__ __informs__ (25) about the way the problem was __resolved__ (26). (185 words)

But the techniques of preservation, freezing and dehydration used __to treat__ (27) food destroy almost completely the taste. A __hudge__ (28) industry developped in the United States since the end of the Second World War. The __industry of the fast food__ (29) would not exist without __that of the aromas__ (30). Now, if the names of the big American chains of fast food and their __flagship__ (31) products became world-famous and are henceforth __a member of__ (32) our popular culture, very few people are __capable__ (33) to quote the names of the companies which make the taste __of the fast food__ (34). The __industry of the aromas__ (35) __is of an extreme discretion__ (36). Its leaders __do not reveal either__ (37) the __exact formula of the diverse aromatic constituents__ (38), __or__ (39) the identity of their __customers__ (40). (310 words)

(1) « French fries » convient mieux. McDonald’s est américain et c’est aussi ce qui est écrit sur le menu http://www.mcdonalds.com/usa/eat/mcdonalds_menu.html (2) Optez plutôt pour « crunchy » ou « crispy ». On utilise « crusty » pour du pain ou de la pâte. (3) Ne convient pas. « food critics » (4) On ne peut pas copier la syntaxe du français ; on est obligé de changer le temps du verbe : «have been enjoying for a long time» (5) Même remarque que (1). Vous retrouverez « chips » souligné tout au long du texte. (6) Oui, « specific » marche aussi (7) Ne convient pas. « __comes neither__ » (8) McDonald’s (9) « from » (10) Ne convient pas « __from__ the __cooking__ equipment __they are cooked in__**/** __in which they are cooked__ » (11) « from » (12) « of a French fry » (13) « __the__ cooking oil » (14) Maladroit. « For over ten years », « For several decades» (15) McDonald’s (16) « of 7% cotton oil and 93% beef fat » (17) « gained » (18) A revoir. Réfléchir au sens. (19) Trouvez une meilleure expression (20) « in » (21) « the Mcdonald’s company » (22) Ne convient pas. « switched to» (23) « with a » (24) « __at the__ ingredients __now used__ » (25) Optez plutôt pour « gives information ». (26) « solved » est mieux (27) « for the treatment of food» est mieux (28) Orthographe (29) « The fast-food industry » (30) « the __flavor__ industry » (31) « best-selling » (32) « part of » (33) « able » (34) « of fast-food» sans article (35) « the flavor industry » (36) « is extremely secretive » (37) « neither reveal » (38) « precise formula of the diverse flavor compounds » (39) « nor » (40) « clients » est mieux